A river between us

appamprawnsNov 26, 2021Nov 26, 2021Odes, Uncategorizedriverode, riverpoem. relationshippoem

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soni writes about children and people in controlled spaces, in his quest for appam stew. homi writes in the hope of being able to buy prawns to make patiyo. View more posts

5 thoughts on “A river between us”

cheriewhite says:

Nov 26, 2021 at 9:19 pm

This is a beautiful piece! I love the analogies here! 😍

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1. appamprawns says:
  
  Nov 26, 2021 at 9:20 pm
  
  Thanks for the lovely comments. Your words encourage me to write more 🥰
  
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  1. cheriewhite says:
    
    Nov 26, 2021 at 9:21 pm
    
    My pleasure.
    
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Christine Bolton, Poetry for Healing says:

Nov 27, 2021 at 6:49 pm

I love the analogy of a difficult relationships and the changing currents of a river. A wonderful write ☺️

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1. appamprawns says:
  
  Nov 27, 2021 at 6:50 pm
  
  Thank you !
  
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